Thanks for all the encouragement.
I am not a great kavi or anything, I can barely write poetry at all. For this poem I recieved some sort of divine inspiration or something (yes, I am crazy). All of I sudden one day I just sat down at the computer and in less than 5 min wrote the first part out. Same thing happened with the second part. I felt Lord Nityananda was guiding me the whole way, otherwise I don't know how I could of written even such a simple piece of poetry.