Anytype Of Poems

[SummerLoving]

Although your heart is now taken,

I would just like to tell you now,

That I have something for you,

Although your heart is now take,

I still have this feeling for you,

This feeling cannot be explained,

But if you let me get a chance to explain,

We can become more than friends,

Although your heart is still taken,

I will always have this feeling for you.

 

What would you say this poem/writing would be from a scale from 1 - 10?

[Gauracandra]

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[gHari]

Lost one point for spelling error.

 

To whom is the poem addressed?

[Guest guest]

Wrote this many years ago. Haven't kept up with the files I made, so I had to recreate this from memory. Just can't remember it all.

 

I hope to make this a song someday.

 

Please feel free to fill in what you deem appropriate.

 

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Oh love, you are the better half of me

Though you do not realize

But I trust that we can be happy and free

Much to your surprise

We both know the pain of our loneliness

Can be too much to bear

And do we consider ourselves victims?

Or it is that we just don't care?

 

Stumbling blocks of selfish thoughts

Defeat us from the start

But in our confluence

Illumination and self-effacement are synonymous in the heart

 

(Chorus)

As my master pleaded with me, I'm doing the same

Know your self-interest is without desire for gain

 

Propriety and the non-existent

Are seen not to endure

As one chasing a mirage finds––alas––it only serves to allure

You may not yet know how spirit

Abides with morbid waste

Yet if you would notice

A loving familiar grace awaits your pleasure of transcendental tastes

 

As my master pleaded with me, you can do the same

Turn off, fall in, and sing out with the holy name

 

(Contemporary comments and pastime descriptions here - fading in and out, sometimes overlapping... similar to the effect on Us and Them found on Dark Side of the Moon album by Pink Floyd)

 

Our Lord's bliss is everywhere

Perpetual opulence in dance and song

A timeless humor entranced

At the reflection of a lover coupled along

Thoughts of devotional love unfold ecstatic pastimes mystics follow

Where all truths decorate you, with paradise, in the lover you'll meet tomorrow

 

As my master pleaded with me, it's always the same

… beyond this foolish game

 

Life is an illusion

Being seldom what it seems

Please walk (run) with me to the other side

And live for a better dream

 

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