Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 Thats lovely Chris but Haiku has 5 syllabuls in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the last. Not that there is anything wrong with your beautiful sentiment :-)) love elektra x x x --- On Sat, 23/8/08, Chris_H <chghes1 wrote: > Chris_H <chghes1 > As I Am > I Shall Be > I Awake Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger. Quote
Guest guest Posted August 23, 2008 Report Posted August 23, 2008 If one is fussy About the number of Letters in each lineOne can callThis haikuas Hi-jaku !!RegardsVG--- On Sat, 23/8/08, Elektra Fire <elektra.fire wrote:Elektra Fire <elektra.fire Re: Kundalini Haiku Chris and everybody Date: Saturday, 23 August, 2008, 4:03 PM Thats lovely Chris but Haiku has 5 syllabuls in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the last. Not that there is anything wrong with your beautiful sentiment :-)) love elektra x x x --- On Sat, 23/8/08, Chris_H <chghes1 (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> wrote: > Chris_H <chghes1 (AT) hotmail (DOT) com> > As I Am > I Shall Be > I Awake Send instant messages to your online friends http://uk.messenger . Did you know? You can CHAT without downloading messenger. Click here Quote
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