You have Gemini ascendant and Mercury as your LL. Placed in the sixth
house, it is likely to give you some health problems, a bad temper and
some communicational problems (your bursting out for members not
responding to your request on this site).
Mercury in scorpio here makes the person shrewd and yes he might sound destructively critical but wait a minute....they get to the point. The problem is thats what causes people to be turned off.... guess thats what happened here.
and the mention about health problems....sorry but i beg to differ here.....If sixth house gets strong by having a malefic positioned there, it should be considered good for health. Infact According of Maharshi Parashara, Rahu in sixth house gives a longer life. Not sure what made you come up with the conclusion that you did Pran.
Venus your yogkaraka is also
in a bad house likely to cause problems in marriage which is also
Venus is in Capricorn, tends to make the individual imprudent, ambitious and boastful yet subtle. With regards to marriage infact they stand to 'gain' from marriage in this house as opposed to how it has been described by you. The only negative I see here is that they end up marrying late owed to their picky nature as opposed to how pran simply chooses to make his deduction.
I could go on and on but very quickly, Saturn in the 4th house shall keep the native away from their place of birth and a placement of this sort would allow the native to succeed only in a place away from his/her place of birth. The only downside I see here is that they would run into impediments in the event the native intends to stay in their place of birth over the long term.
It seems there are a lot of so-called self-pronounced astrologers around here who need to get their basics right before they start providing people with a sub-standard analysis of their chart. I am talking to you Pran......are you listening?