Guest guest Report post Posted April 20, 2003 Hey guys i wrote this poem and i wanted to see what you all thought about it(please be truthful) I know it's prob. bad! Any help is also appriciated! DREAM Every day I look forward to the eve Because I know in the eve I dream I dream about everything Good and Bad Love and Hate Life and Death Happy and Sad Friends and Enemies My dreams take me to a far away place, For awhile I’m lost in my own perfect world, And for that little while I am in my own Heaven I can get away from all the fears of the world And the stresses of church and life. I know that my dreams cannot last forever, But while I’m sleeping time doesn’t matter. When I wake I go on with my day and whenever I get down I go back to the place in my dreams, Where all is perfect. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest guest Report post Posted April 21, 2003 dreaming like this does not solve your or your country's problems. get real. vedic literture says: asato ma sat gamay tamaso ma jyotir gamaya mrityor ma maritam gamaya hinduism (KC included) says how to live based on truth. jai sri prabhupada! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Enlightened 0 Report post Posted April 21, 2003 The poem is cool. I like it because this talks about how we are free from all sorts of attachments and fears and hate and love when we are dreaming. Atleast i think thats what you said. well thanks for enlightening me with such a wonderful poem thanks! /images/graemlins/smile.gif -enlightened /images/graemlins/grin.gif Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest guest Report post Posted April 22, 2003 Yeah that's what i was getting at, I'm not great at writing poems but they inspire me so much I thought I'd try! glad you liked it! /images/graemlins/smile.gif Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tulsi108 0 Report post Posted April 22, 2003 Poetry is another form of expression from the intellect, please keep writing ,don't mind what others say or think, but plaster your feelings,emotions and thoughts. a small token. What is a Poem? What is a poem? if not an expression from the soul, captive in the chains of the unknown, she longs for her mysterious love, what is a poem if not a tear, splattered in a white page, the cry from a lonely heart, or the adoration transformed in words, a poem could be, a flight we take with the mind, to the past dressed in pink, or to the tomorrow, with the brilliance of a sun, a poem is to a poet, like his bread of everyday, his bed, and his lonesome drink, if I have a poem with me, then... I am not alone, I am in good company. for more poems. tulsi108 www.lovestories. search under dhyana Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest guest Report post Posted May 4, 2003 Thanks a lot! I appriciate all of the feedback! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest guest Report post Posted May 5, 2003 Imagine Imagine there's no heaven, It's easy if you try, No hell below us, Above us only sky, Imagine all the people living for today... Imagine there's no countries, It isnt hard to do, Nothing to kill or die for, No religion too, Imagine all the people living life in peace... Imagine no possesions, I wonder if you can, No need for greed or hunger, A brotherhood of man, Imagine all the people Sharing all the world... You may say Im a dreamer, but Im not the only one, I hope some day you'll join us, And the world will live as one. -- Writen by: John Lennon © Bag productions inc. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest guest Report post Posted May 5, 2003 Gloria Gaynor - I Will Survive lyrics First I was afraid I was petrified Kept thinking I could never live without you by my side But I spent so many nights thinking how you did me wrong I grew strong I learned how to carry on and so you're back from outer space I just walked in to find you here with that sad look upon your face I should have changed my stupid lock I should have made you leave your key If I had known for just one second you'd be back to bother me Go on now go walk out the door just turn around now 'cause you're not welcome anymore weren't you the one who tried to hurt me with goodbye you think I'd crumble you think I'd lay down and die Oh no, not I I will survive as long as i know how to love I know I will stay alive I've got all my life to live I've got all my love to give and I'll survive I will survive It took all the strength I had not to fall apart kept trying hard to mend the pieces of my broken heart and I spent oh so many nights just feeling sorry for myself I used to cry Now I hold my head up high and you see me somebody new I'm not that chained up little person still in love with you and so you felt like dropping in and just expect me to be free now I'm saving all my loving for someone who's loving me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest guest Report post Posted May 8, 2003 Thanks! BTW great song! I love that song! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
