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Hey guys i wrote this poem and i wanted to see what you all thought about it(please be truthful) I know it's prob. bad! Any help is also appriciated!

 

DREAM

 

Every day I look forward to the eve

Because I know in the eve I dream

I dream about everything

Good and Bad

Love and Hate

Life and Death

Happy and Sad

Friends and Enemies

My dreams take me to a far away place,

For awhile I’m lost in my own perfect world,

And for that little while I am in my own Heaven

I can get away from all the fears of the world

And the stresses of church and life.

I know that my dreams cannot last forever,

But while I’m sleeping time doesn’t matter.

When I wake I go on with my day and whenever I get down

I go back to the place in my dreams,

Where all is perfect.

 

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dreaming like this does not solve your or your country's problems.

 

get real.

vedic literture says:

 

asato ma sat gamay

tamaso ma jyotir gamaya

mrityor ma maritam gamaya

 

hinduism (KC included) says how to live based on truth.

 

jai sri prabhupada!

 

 

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The poem is cool. I like it because this talks about how we are free from all sorts of attachments and fears and hate and love when we are dreaming. Atleast i think thats what you said.

 

well thanks for enlightening me with such a wonderful poem thanks! /images/graemlins/smile.gif

 

-enlightened /images/graemlins/grin.gif

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Yeah that's what i was getting at, I'm not great at writing poems but they inspire me so much I thought I'd try! glad you liked it! /images/graemlins/smile.gif

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Poetry is another form of expression from the intellect,

please keep writing ,don't mind what others say or think,

but plaster your feelings,emotions and thoughts.

a small token.

 

What is a Poem?

 

What is a poem?

if not an expression

from the soul,

captive in the chains

of the unknown,

she longs for her mysterious

love,

what is a poem if not a tear,

splattered in a white page,

the cry from a lonely heart,

or the adoration transformed

in words,

a poem could be,

a flight we take with the mind,

to the past dressed in pink,

or to the tomorrow,

with the brilliance of a sun,

a poem is to a poet,

like his bread of everyday,

his bed,

and his lonesome drink,

if I have a poem with me,

then...

I am not alone,

I am in good company.

 

for more poems.

tulsi108 www.lovestories. search under dhyana

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  • 2 weeks later...
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Imagine

 

Imagine there's no heaven,

It's easy if you try,

No hell below us,

Above us only sky,

Imagine all the people

living for today...

 

Imagine there's no countries,

It isnt hard to do,

Nothing to kill or die for,

No religion too,

Imagine all the people

living life in peace...

 

Imagine no possesions,

I wonder if you can,

No need for greed or hunger,

A brotherhood of man,

Imagine all the people

Sharing all the world...

 

You may say Im a dreamer,

but Im not the only one,

I hope some day you'll join us,

And the world will live as one.

 

 

--

 

Writen by: John Lennon

© Bag productions inc.

 

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Gloria Gaynor - I Will Survive lyrics

First I was afraid

I was petrified

Kept thinking I could never live

without you by my side

But I spent so many nights

thinking how you did me wrong

I grew strong

I learned how to carry on

and so you're back

from outer space

I just walked in to find you here

with that sad look upon your face

I should have changed my stupid lock

I should have made you leave your key

If I had known for just one second

you'd be back to bother me

 

Go on now go walk out the door

just turn around now

'cause you're not welcome anymore

weren't you the one who tried to hurt me with goodbye

you think I'd crumble

you think I'd lay down and die

Oh no, not I

I will survive

as long as i know how to love

I know I will stay alive

I've got all my life to live

I've got all my love to give

and I'll survive

I will survive

 

It took all the strength I had

not to fall apart

kept trying hard to mend

the pieces of my broken heart

and I spent oh so many nights

just feeling sorry for myself

I used to cry

Now I hold my head up high

and you see me

somebody new

I'm not that chained up little person

still in love with you

and so you felt like dropping in

and just expect me to be free

now I'm saving all my loving

for someone who's loving me

 

 

 

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