Guest guest Posted December 4, 2002 Report Share Posted December 4, 2002 Hi Everyone, I would like to offer up a wide variety of hand-made & hand-painted Perfume Bottles imported from Egypt. There are tiny, small, medium and large perfume bottles, animal perfume bottles and some beautiful ornaments. I do not have PayPal buttons up on all of the yet so you can send me an email to order at ahb View them at http://www.aheavenlybody.com Please reference this list to: Receive 15% off any perfume bottle or assortment. Receive 20% off any item from the Gifts for the Entire Family. Cheryl Smith Anchorage AK Mail Plus - Powerful. Affordable. Sign up now. http://mailplus. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 4, 2002 Report Share Posted December 4, 2002 Also, would you please evaluate my site. Many people have been there and am getting less than 2% sales. I am doing something wrong with the site and I have yet to figure it out. Cheryl --- Cheryl <female_tigress wrote: > Hi Everyone, > > I would like to offer up a wide variety of > hand-made & hand-painted Perfume Bottles > imported > from Egypt. > > There are tiny, small, medium and large perfume > bottles, animal perfume bottles and some > beautiful ornaments. > > I do not have PayPal buttons up on all of the > yet > so you can send me an email to order at > ahb > > View them at http://www.aheavenlybody.com > > Please reference this list to: > > Receive 15% off any perfume bottle or > assortment. > > Receive 20% off any item from the Gifts for the > Entire Family. > > Cheryl Smith > Anchorage AK > > > > > > Mail Plus - Powerful. Affordable. Sign > up now. > http://mailplus. > ===== Cheryl Smith Anchorage AK Mail Plus - Powerful. Affordable. Sign up now. http://mailplus. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 4, 2002 Report Share Posted December 4, 2002 Hi Cheryl, Congrats on the new shop I am in the process of doing about 10,000 things at once (okay, I'm exaggerating, I'm only doing about 8 things at once *LOL*), but at first glance the store looks nice ... maybe on the front page where you mention for example ... Check out our imported Egyptian Perfume Bottles, Ornaments and our non-aromatherapy gift selections in our catalog. We sell diffusers with birds, animals, and sealife. They are made of ceramic, resin, glass, and pewter. You will find these and many more diffusers in our catalog." Make the words like "Egyptian Perfume Bottles", and "diffusers" and other products mentioned links to the actual products That was just my first quick thought! I haven't gotten to poke around too much YET, but as I do I'll definitely give ya input! Keep up the good work and good luck!!!!! *Smile*Chris (list mom - who has a TON of work to do on her own web site!) http://www.alittleolfactory.com Cheryl [female_tigress] Tuesday, December 03, 2002 5:31 PM Subject: Re: Egyptian Perfume BottlesAlso, would you please evaluate my site. Manypeople have been there and am getting less than2% sales. I am doing something wrong with thesite and I have yet to figure it out.Cheryl--- Cheryl <female_tigress wrote:> Hi Everyone,> > I would like to offer up a wide variety of> hand-made & hand-painted Perfume Bottles> imported> from Egypt.> > There are tiny, small, medium and large perfume> bottles, animal perfume bottles and some> beautiful ornaments.> > I do not have PayPal buttons up on all of the> yet> so you can send me an email to order at> ahb > View them at http://www.aheavenlybody.com> > Please reference this list to:> > Receive 15% off any perfume bottle or> assortment.> > Receive 20% off any item from the Gifts for the> Entire Family. > > Cheryl Smith> Anchorage AK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 4, 2002 Report Share Posted December 4, 2002 At 07:31 PM 12/03/02, you wrote: >Also, would you please evaluate my site. Many people have been there and >am getting less than 2% sales. I am doing something wrong with the site >and I have yet to figure it out. Cheryl... punch up the text on your home page a bit. You're telling people what's there, but you're not giving them a reason to check it out. Punch up the language. Really *sell* it. Give them a reason to want to look deeper into your site. Make it sound intersting. And fix the typos and punctuation errors. :-) I know they're hard to catch when you're deep into creating the site. Your home page is your biggest advertisement. If it doesn't pull people into the site immediately, you've lost them. -- Sandy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 4, 2002 Report Share Posted December 4, 2002 Hi Cheryl > Also, would you please evaluate my site. Many> people have been there and am getting less than> 2% sales. I am doing something wrong with the> site and I have yet to figure it out. Have just had a look at your site. I'm in UK and tend not to buy from USA sites because of cost of postage etc Here's a couple of comments I'm quite happy to read on site but think that pictures enhance any site and help people to make decision and they need them at the beginning so that they find it attractive right away - then they can go look at the writing. So, I think I'd like more pictures when you first go into the site and then I would like to be able to click on a picture to enlarge it. And I think that you could put a picture up of your bottles of oils and pots of cream etc - just a 'group' picture perhaps would make it look more 'interesting' My husband was looking at it over my shoulder and asked me to go to the page that said what quality of oils you sell, but I couldn't find anything about that, not anything that says why I should buy my oils from you rather than anyone else!! I'm an aromatherapist and to me quality is the most important thing. I suppose that, as an aromatherapist, if I was looking for essential oils I wouldn't go to a Gift Shop site because I wouldn't expect the oils to be clinical quality, so having the combined name might put some people off. He also said that he didn't think brown was a very good colour! We both thought your pictures of burners and glassware were really nice and they downloaded quickly, so there was no problem there. (other than I'd like to be able to enlarge them, but that might be my eyesight!) I did think that there was more emphasis on the glassware than on the aromatherapy, but that is just looking at it from my angle. Just little bits, I hope they help. It's a nightmare isn't it! (He also said that 2% isn't bad!!) Regards Ann - Scotland Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 4, 2002 Report Share Posted December 4, 2002 Ann & Husband, Thank you and your husband for the analysis. I am still working on it, but all of these comments really help. I print out all this help,go and make changesas I can. So it comes out brown on your computer.....mine shows me the black and gold. ouch - brown is soooo ugly, imo. I am looking at a new design that I like, more in line with my retail store's colors of purple and pink. Well I will be making many changes and I really appreciate the comments. I really like the ideas of more pictures at the start ... and I need to figure out how to do the thumbnails so that they will enlarge. But I will! Cheryl ===== Cheryl Smith Anchorage AK Mail Plus - Powerful. Affordable. Sign up now. http://mailplus. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 5, 2002 Report Share Posted December 5, 2002 Good luck - nice to be able to help Ann Ann & Husband,Thank you and your husband for the analysis. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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