Guest guest Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 I haven't written poetry in years. After a traumatic experience I closed off my heart to this kind of expression. In an attempt to open up again I am going to write a poem about Amma. So here it goes: Mother how can I express what you mean to me? With a simple embrace you take away all my suffering. Even if only for that moment. You stand out like a beacon on a foggy sea, Drawing me closer with each passing wave. You give without pause, Fed by the source of all things. No words could begin to capture What you are. So Mother all I can say is, Thank you. <moderator's note> Don't post this on the Ammachi Free Speech Zone. You will be savaged by tomgull. </moderator's note> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 dear Ryan Your expression to Amma is tender and full of heart. Thank you for the courage and vulnerability of sharing it with us. And i really like; " You stand out like a beacon on a foggy sea, Drawing we closer with each passing wave. " Lovely imagery. Ryan here is a link where one can share their heart and prayers with Amma. In case you would like to send it to Amma or want to express more heart openings to come. Your intent of heart is received by Amma. Amma has said numerous times when a child calls on her and holds her in mind and heart she can see images of that one's face. http://www.amritapuri.org/eservices/to-amma/ <http://www.amritapuri.org/eservices/to-amma/> <http://www.amritapuri.org/eservices/to-amma/ <http://www.amritapuri.org/eservices/to-amma/> > May you be Amma blessed Jai Ma ordinarysparrow Ammachi , " Ryan " <technosadhak wrote: > > I haven't written poetry in years. After a traumatic experience I closed off my heart to this kind of expression. In an attempt to open up again I am going to write a poem about Amma. So here it goes: > > Mother how can I express what you mean to me? > With a simple embrace you take away all my suffering. > Even if only for that moment. > You stand out like a beacon on a foggy sea, > Drawing me closer with each passing wave. > You give without pause, > Fed by the source of all things. > No words could begin to capture > What you are. > So Mother all I can say is, > Thank you. > > > <moderator's note> > > Don't post this on the Ammachi Free Speech Zone. You will be savaged by tomgull. > > </moderator's note> > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 Thank you sparrow. your feedback really brightened my day. I sent it to Amma, I hope she likes it. Jai Ma! Ryan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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