1941Gutka : Two suggestions / Prabhakar ji

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Respected Yograj ji,

I am making two suggestions for your perusal. If you think they are more practical then these suggestions can be incorporated in the next edition:

Suggestion # 1 :

Page 198 [ ketu khana# 5 ] line # 4

This line is marked with 'A' for a footnote. But as has been the convention the explanation does not appear at the end of the same page. Instead it appears on the next page at the end of Ketu khana # 6. The original Urdu copy also has it at the end of Ketu # 6.

It took me quite some time to corelate the footnote under Ketu # 6 with an explanation for Ketu khana # 5.

Therefore, if possible the foot note can be brought over to page 198 itself at the end of Ketu # 5 where it actually belongs.

Although it will not be according to the way it is originally in the book, but it will be more convenient for a reader.

 

Suggestion # 2 :

Page 218 line # 14-15

In the original book the phrase 'baki 2 kutta ka" has been braced with a bracket. I think your gutka should also add a bracket there to indicate that the phrase within should be read separately and not as a part of the running text.

With Regards,

Varun Trivedi