Guest guest Posted November 16, 2004 Report Share Posted November 16, 2004 Emilixirly wrote: Sonnet II, for Amma My closely aligned bones draw You right now... One-second gaze at embrace... Don’t need stacks of age to hand my second to Your hand. A chocolate is enough. Dear Emilixirly ~ what a beautiful Sonnet of Love to Amma. My inclination is to set it to music (I am a singer/songwriter). What a beautiful bhajan it would make! Jai Ma ~ Linda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted November 16, 2004 Report Share Posted November 16, 2004 --- nierika wrote: > > Emilixirly wrote: > > Sonnet II, for Amma > > My closely aligned bones draw You right now... > > One-second gaze at embrace... > Don't need stacks of age to hand my second > to Your hand. A chocolate is enough. I don't know boo about sonnets (I used to dread having to study poetry in high school English), but the above 3 lines sound like a haiku! Keval The all-new My - Get yours free! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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